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Anne-Marie Hubert's avatar

I really enjoyed this story Gabriel!

Got me wondering what the narrator wanted to warn us about from the beginning. Good tension building; I was carried throughout. Well done!

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Gabriel Golovkin's avatar

Thanks for your time reading and commenting. Personally I don’t want to know the future and I have no desire to change the past.

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Anne-Marie Hubert's avatar

Totally agree!

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Bob D. Smiley's avatar

This was great Gabriel. It has taken me a bit but feel like I’m finally finding my people in this site.

And funny enough I also just posted a “machine” story the other day… slightly more serious than my usual fare. But check it out!

https://www.silvercordstories.com/p/the-god-machine

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Gabriel Golovkin's avatar

Thanks Bob, I will.

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Gabriel Golovkin's avatar

Thanks for reading.

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